lost in a quint of darkness

first of all sorry for the size of the pic...i cudn't find a larger prototype of the original anywhere.

This was a pic in the albums of one of my very dear friends and she has this habit of putting up abritrary pics and asking everyone to suggest a name for the pic.

I, as my habit is...went down to suggest the following for this pic


lost in a quint of darkness

the light falls from behind;
showing road to the shadows;
a fathom long it is...;
but pointing towards the gallows;

i try to rise ;
trying to resist the darkness;
i try to move forward;
in the tinged road of lowlessness;

David tries to fight again ;
as he did so long before;

but still the air seems different;
the feet seem so sore..;

but, i am the baron;
i am the czar;
i am the magnate;
i am the one who has to be at par;

So, Take me in as u want;
Take me to the depths;
I will always come out winning;
I will always be in front of u;
no matter who u are;


this was an instinctive thing which just came out and now that i think of it..it seems like a very amateur writing..man..i have mellowed down!! :P

UPDATE : just added a new counter..so it starts from ZERO again!!!....man...its sad to see the number at null again... :(